"Darkness" Ambient somethinggenre. Also Zombies!

[MisterApe]

Did this during the night after watching the Dawn of the Dead remake from 2004, trying to keep an ambient theme going.
Haven't really done the mix down yet (Tired ears.) and still need to master the fuck out of it ofcourse, add some more tiny details perhaps.

But it's sort of there : D.

Thoughts?

Edit: Fixed some minor stuff and broke up the beat a little, if no one has anything to add I'll proceed with trying to give my best to mastering it in a few days.

https://soundcloud.com/suckstobeyou%2Fdarkness-rises

 

[neddez]

lol i love the little Laurence Fishburne speech in that movie

thought it could have done with some kind of sweeping atmos (im thinking something that goes down in pitch)

weird stuff tho man, i kinda like the drums

 

[MisterApe]

I'll have a look at it later, thanks : ).
That's just the thing I'm trying to do atm.. adding more and more tiny tiny details to it.

Overall, also the first tune that I'm fully finishing, feels good .

 

[neddez]

I'll have a look at it later, thanks : ).
That's just the thing I'm trying to do atm.. adding more and more tiny tiny details to it.

Overall, also the first tune that I'm fully finishing, feels good .

congrats bro, i find the smaller ideas are the hardest things to add to a track

 

[MisterApe]

Update:

Pretty much finished all the things I wanted to put in the track, just tried to make the bass and the kicks not drown each other out so much, I heard some clipping on my headphones.
Hope that succeeded.

https://soundcloud.com/suckstobeyou%2Fdarkness-rises

Now to take a few days off from this, then come back to it with some fresh ears!