Dark tune

[Madd Maxx]

Hey guys, i made this song yesterday using some doctor who samples haha, please let me know what you think, also feedback on what aspects you like (if any) and your opinion on what i should do to fix what you dont like
https://soundcloud.com/maxx-honey%2Fdont-blink

 

[Fobicafa]

Link seems to be broken

 

[Madd Maxx]

Ah, sorry ill update it

 

[smoothassilk]

The timbres you've got going with the breaks are really nice, really rough but not lacking in power. I like the switch you make but I think you should vary the breaks more within each section, there are definitely more things you could do... try moving the snares off 2 and 4 or doing a few repeat 3 beat patterns or fills/rolls and stuff. Or like ghost notes that are a bit shorter and quieter give you lots of potential ideas. I also reckon the ending is a bit lazy, you don't need to do much to finish it but you could do a little bit more.

I would like the idea apart from I watched too much dr. who as a kid so now it seems a bit silly

 

[Madd Maxx]

Cheers for the feedback man, really appreciated, i find im improving alot on drum structure but am still vastly learning,never had so much fun making breaks though ^_^ i definately get really lazy with the endings sometimes haha i make a hook and then an intro into it and then i just want to show everyone so i need to stop that hahahah