Dark Techy/Liquid track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by graffitizax, Aug 22, 2013.

  1. graffitizax

    graffitizax Hauntr

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    hey guys, would love some feedback on my new tune


    Cheers :) ^^^^
     
  2. LVB

    LVB Active Member

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    may want some reverb on the piano to make it less stuttery, nice work! really digging the vibe
     
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    I like that glitchy piano, however I feel like I would like it to switch up some notes every now and then. The vibe is great... Drums and bass are spot on imo. The idea for the end is good but I feel like it needs something more that brings you in to the outro. It's a nice track but I feel like it's only relying on just that one sample. You got some skills!
     
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    during the intro i thought my pc is lagging :)
    maybe the song is too long or you need more variations
     
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    Hi!
    The drum & bass are top notch - obviously this being a dnb track thats pretty important ;). The transitions between the elements are also really good too.
    Liking this piano as well - though maybe one other variation on it would be nice.
    Really liking this one though :)
     
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    graffitizax Hauntr

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    thanks for the advice guys :)