Dark roller

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Mormok, May 12, 2014.

  1. Mormok

    Mormok New Member

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    Hey all

    Iv been working on this dark roller over last few weekends, Its still a work in progress but Im pretty happy with it so far. Check it out and let me know what you think of it.



    If someone could tell me how I can get my sound cloud to link directly to this post I just cant figure it out.
     
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  2. Astroshade

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    Like it.
    Umm.... what I would add is maybe a tiny bit more atmo into the pad u know?
    Like, work just a bit on the surround of it.

    IMO you could boost the wobbly Sub a bit more, u know to make it a bit more aggressive.
    Same goes for the pulsating pad :)

    Otherwise nice work

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    And about the soundcloud link you just put your link between [ SOUNDCLOUD ] and [ /SOUNDCLOUD ] (but without the spacdes between the brackets)
     
  3. SuBKA

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    Very minimal! I like the vibes but that one high bass frequency hurty my ears a bit to be honest. Very nice work though!
     
  4. Mormok

    Mormok New Member

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    Cheers Astroshade I have been trying to figure that out for awhile now

    Thanks for the feedback aswell
     
  5. Solace

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    That kick doesn't sound right for some reason...
    I always find it hard to find a decent kick for these kind of tunes, but I'd choose a deeper one, less acoustic maybe, or punchier.
    Boost the sub a bit

    Other than that, really like it, the way I hear it in my head, it could be a serious banger
     
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  7. Mormok

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    I think the kick drum is too heavily compressed which may be making it sound odd, I plan to try finish it later today so ill chuck it up when its done. Peace
     
  8. pareidolius

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    Niceeee vibes man, excellent drums in my opinion. Not too much, but really nicely understated. I reckon you just need abit more automation on the bassline and maybe a few SFX throughout, not lots though, just enough to get by with. Really nice tune though, big ups!