Dark Dubstep, Female Vocals

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  1. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    just started this, but looking for ideas on how to develop what i have so far. and whether the drums and bassline work. cheers

    new version with more bass, and remastered:



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  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Sounds like a long intro right now, you need to work on an immense build up, leading to a quick pause, before dropping into utter filth!
     
  3. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    i was going for a vibe like this -



    thanks for the reply tho, might make a heavy version as well and see what gets the best response.
     
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    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    here's my latest version:

     
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    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    anyone else got any feedback pls?
     
  6. Psychoholic

    Psychoholic Quantum Cunt

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    I don't hear any proper bass at all with my headphones on @ work, I'll try again tonight on my set at home but you should have a bass that bangs on all systems.
     
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    Hi just checked at out at home as promised, still no proper bass man I seriously miss that in your track.
     
  8. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    i'll pump up the sub, must be my speakers. cheers. any thoughts on the track besides that?
     
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    I like it man, it does sound like a big intro as fletch said and the bass needs to come up for sure, i dont know if its me but after a while it seems to get a tad 'luggish' maybe mix up the drum beat, but other than that its sounding good
     
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    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    here's the bassier version!

     
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    I would make more variation in drums and bassline Its a bit bland for me (its good but gets old quick for some reason i think more variation in bass timbre would help) overall good track though!
     
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    I don't usually like dubstep, but...
    ...This is good. Vehry good!!! Have you added some flanger on the vocals or this is about my ears?
     
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  15. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    cheers. nah just duplicated the vocals and added unison to one.

    thanks to everyone else for the tips
     
  16. DNBusa

    DNBusa PROOF IS N THE PRODUCTION

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    not a bad tune man. Just needs some love here and there like more going on. Maybe extra drum lines and fills with diff bass coming in and out. and more shuffle in the drums would be sick. Not a bad tune man =)
     
  17. IV4

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    You need a little more dynamics going on to make this track great. Despite that the track was pretty damn good.