Dubstep Dark Dub with Female Vocals

[junglistguy2221]

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fchrishawker%2Finsomniac

an idea at the moment but what do you lot think i should add next? not sure where to take it. cheers

 

[D-Jhepz]

mixdown is horrible (probably not that far....) love the vocal... i think it should be more "background" would add to the vibe that dark and slow like 5am sort of tune.... and the bass more prominent

 

[junglistguy2221]

mix sounds alright on my speakers, crisp but bassy, hmmm.. not sure what to change in that department.

 

[junglistguy2221]

new version uploaded

 

[fluid.element]

I agree, the vocals sound too spaced out in my opinion, bring them in a bit..

There isn't much more you can add without it sounding messy.. it sounds quite nice but considering the deep vibe I would try and get the sub bass a bit deeper, surgically EQ 30-60hz up or consider changing the sub bass.

bring the hats out more, either using a longer reverb or widen them out, or both!

it sounds like you have two basslines bouncing off each other that interfere with each other at the same time.. maybe eq them away from each other?

Just my thoughts! really nice tune though and the vocals are delicious. yum.

 

[junglistguy2221]

cheers for the feedback. have uploaded another updated mix with extended intro etc.

anyone else got any tips?