Drum & Bass Danny Darko Remix Comp

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  1. AdamDNB

    AdamDNB New Member

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    Hi, Remix i did for the Danny Darko Remix Comp. Would like some feedback on this one and I've only used headphones for this track so hopefully mix is okish.

     
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    Nice track man, nothing stands out to me as needing that much work really. I feel that the overall high end of the track could be tamed a bit, maybe shortening the release on some of the hi-hat hits or removing some of the white noise effects could make it a little crisper. Good work!
     
  3. AdamDNB

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    ok yea i did boost the high end bit when i did a home master jobby on it, maybe i went bit to much. cheers
     
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    done an update to try and improve

     
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    Hey Adam, I noticed a few things that bothered me in the track.
    In the intro, it seems that some snare hits are quieter than others. Also in the intro at 0:32 I think you should work on the vocals, they don't really match the drum (the kick) pattern.
    On the drop I would add a kick to emphasis the fall. At 1:09 again the vocals don't really match the pattern (right after "what the future holds").
    I'm not a huge fan of the lead you introduce at 1:30 but that's just my personal opinion.
    Also at 1:50 I'd go a little smoother on the filter cutoff release.
    Overall it's a nice track but I think it still needs some more work. ;)
     
  6. AdamDNB

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    Yea the vocals are damn hard to get right on this. They were 115bpm. Cheers for advice il have a play
     
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    Took your advice and worked on it and improved again, i am more happy with it now thank you