DANCEFLOOR/JUMP UP (work in progress)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by EvezDroppin, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin .

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    ez all, im usually makin liquid so thought id have a go at something more upbeat!
    i like the initial layout and the bassline but feels it needs to switch up to something more jump up orientated, something with more energy. i realise the second bass to come in is a little loud,,, just lookin for feedback on the idea and vibe really!
    iv got a small clip at the end of the more "jump up" part.
    if u could check it and let me know what u think that'd be much appreciated!

    http://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo/danceflooooor-work-in-progress
     
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    this isnt standard womp womp jump up im really looking for some feeeedback pleasee!
     
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    Thats actually sounding pretty good mate.

    As for switching things up, I'd just make a different 16 bar bass riff to alternate between. Keeping the same sound, just change up the melody of it a little.
     
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    thanks man! i will try that sounds like a better idea than going all wompy at the end.
    safety!