Dan Marshall - New tracks (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dan Marshall, Sep 29, 2004.

  1. Dan Marshall

    Dan Marshall Producer

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    Ez all. Got a few recent tunes that i'd like to share with you in return for your feedback.

    3 tunes i would like feedback on atm.

    :idea: Dan Marshall - Spider
    :idea: Dan Marshall - Fiesta
    :idea: Dan Marshall - The Seasons

    You can check them out...

    :gun: Via Winamp: click here
    :gun: Via RealONE: click here
    :gun: Via Windows Media: click here

    :eek: Unsigned as of now.

    Leave your feedback on this forum or you can contact me through methods in my sig.

    Nice one lads. (y)
     
  2. masseye

    masseye Guest

    Amen!!

    Nice man, the intro is a good length, but there needs to be summat else there I reckon, or somethin that leads in2 the break down....the bass is nice in the drop, but it's absoloutely screaming out for a phat distorted AMEN :gun: :gun: :gun: break!!!

    What did you use to make this by the way, sounds like maybe Reason? :slick:

    Just my thoughts man....well done :bump: :| :crazy: :bump:
     
  3. Dan Marshall

    Dan Marshall Producer

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    For all 3 i used bits and peices, Cubase SX for mixdown and most synths.

    There are some elements from reason though :)

    Glad you like shiz, website will be up soon. Cheers for feedback matey :cool:
     
  4. Dr. Ophalus

    Dr. Ophalus Guest

    1st tune:

    Interesting intro - I can imagine more reverb on the piano/trumpet notes.

    The bassline needs a sub, otherwise nice roller.

    The beat for me is to thin, it needs some fattening up with EQ? The thing is though, the whole tune sounds a bit flat, it would be nice to hear a higher quality file.

    I'd like to hear some sort of change in the reprise.

    Wicked roller, just needs mastering.

    Please review my tune, be harsh if need be.

    :violin::missile:
     
  5. Dan Marshall

    Dan Marshall Producer

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    If you'd personally like a real version listen. Pm me...

    I have purposely published the 64kbps compressed versions as i don't like piracy and don't want the tunes put to use.

    I can assure you the real quality is very good, a good 3 hours mastering & EQing was done afterwards.

    Cheers.
     
  6. Cube

    Cube www.exegene.com

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    really like the seasons, nice breaks

    nice work man

    wasnt really feeling the fiesta, its has good production, but its just not my style of dnb really, so cant comment on that one...