Intro: gotta admit man this intro really threw me off at first, sounded almost evil fairground'ish but at 0:25 the switch on the intro suited it much better ! Kick and snare are fucking great man, love the space the kick has really solid and thick. Overall all the drums wise sounds good to me man, really clear and mixed well !
hook: mid bass is really clear and neuro/techy, I'm a sucker for a cool sounding bass so a thumbs up from me on this. Although I was killing for a little more sub bass !
at around the 2:20 minute mark the track did feel a bit samey but that is the trapping of a WIP for sure, I think overall this sounds pretty damn good and is definitely not far from being wrapped up.
Overall all I'd say is a little more sub bass / variation on the 3rd 16 after the drop with the bass (maybe roll a low pass over and a few percussive elements roll in on the way to the breakdown / more wilder edits on the end of every 16 and it's great !
If you could feedback me too man that would be great :
https://dnbforum.com/threads/chapter-11-suspicious-wip.202354/