Drum & Bass D-Jhepz - I'm Fine

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by D-Jhepz, Jan 13, 2013.

  1. D-Jhepz

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    This should make up for that abomination I posted a few days ago...

    Its funny, i was reading the thread about how people have been going at it so hard but only seem to be going nowhere and i was in complete agreement then i came home and managed this some how...



    its a work in progress, havent really started on the effects and tweaking the sound design but any feedback on the drums, arrangement, anything i could add or take away i would be grateful
     
  2. Mr_DnB

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    Hey,

    I like the part from 1:34 to 1:57 the most with the "rattling" sound. However the arrangement is a little bit monotonous I think. To my mind there is no real border between the break and the rest of the track.

    A part from that I think its a good track!
     
  3. D-Jhepz

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    thanks for ur feedback bro... yeah the more i listen the more bored i get... i try get some wubwub and wowow stabs and bounce down the bassline and change it up
     
  4. anikom15

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    This is a fun track! The synth is kind of boring though. Maybe add something to spice it up? Like a strong sub-bass or a sweeping low-pass filter ‾\_(ツ)_/‾