D-Jhepz - Come Along, Alone WIP (ambient dnb/electronica)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by D-Jhepz, Oct 22, 2013.

  1. D-Jhepz

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    been all over the ambient 170 bits these days

    got something nice but naughty let me know what you think and any improvements


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    new finished it and renamed it... deleted the old one but here we go

    Thanks
     
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  2. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    thats one eerie atmospheric intro man. love the vocals and the general vibe of the whole track, top work. only criticism i can think of (your going to hate me) is that the bass doesnt realy work as a drop for me. its too differnt from the intro, if you were to have it low passed a bit and have the filter open up over 16 bars, then have it as it is in the drop i think it would be a bit more suited. Thats just me though, and i do really liek that bass noise too. all the little synth riffs and piano licks are top notch tho. really great track
     
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    you very right haha... but i understand it does come as a bit of surprise to the track but thats kinda why i like it so much... il see what i can put in maybe the sub in a few places just so people have an idea whats to come thanks bud
     
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    Nice job. Yeah the vocal works really well, cool vibe. I don't necessarily think the bass comes in too suddenly, I like it. Whether sound design on that could be improved slightly perhaps, but I like the leads that come in after.
     
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    how would you propose an improvement... wanna finish the structure before i start working on movement and automation
     
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    Pyrococcus Urban Break Twister

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    I totally second DJ Cartel (1st reply), particularly regaring the bassline.
    Only 40 seconds of what could be considered as a full-fledged part (with bassline) so far, so waiting for the further proceeding..
     
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    bump see top for new link
     
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    sounds good to me man. really well produced, sounds very proffesional. good work, very unique too
     
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    thanks man means alot coming from someone with productions like urs :)