D-Jhepz - Come Along, Alone WIP (ambient dnb/electronica)

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DjCartel

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thats one eerie atmospheric intro man. love the vocals and the general vibe of the whole track, top work. only criticism i can think of (your going to hate me) is that the bass doesnt realy work as a drop for me. its too differnt from the intro, if you were to have it low passed a bit and have the filter open up over 16 bars, then have it as it is in the drop i think it would be a bit more suited. Thats just me though, and i do really liek that bass noise too. all the little synth riffs and piano licks are top notch tho. really great track
 
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you very right haha... but i understand it does come as a bit of surprise to the track but thats kinda why i like it so much... il see what i can put in maybe the sub in a few places just so people have an idea whats to come thanks bud
 
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Nice job. Yeah the vocal works really well, cool vibe. I don't necessarily think the bass comes in too suddenly, I like it. Whether sound design on that could be improved slightly perhaps, but I like the leads that come in after.
 
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I totally second DJ Cartel (1st reply), particularly regaring the bassline.
Only 40 seconds of what could be considered as a full-fledged part (with bassline) so far, so waiting for the further proceeding..
 
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