Nice promising intro, would like those blips to be a little crisper on the high end but thats just personal preference....Nice clean drums......
like the sound of that bass coming in on the break....Thats a pretty heavy drop, think a slight pause / silence before the drop would really help it hit hard when it drops! Snare could be a bit crisper on the top end too, but again thats just me being fussy.
Good work....keep it up!