i dont make or listen to this style of dnb so bare with me.
like the intro keeps me interested nice and clear bright hats i always like
after the drop things seem to me to be quite muddy??
maybe more eqing of the low end out of some bits may reduce this the pads and fx for example
has some interesting darkness to it thou some more variation to the layout could also help
10x for the feedback guys..well i changed the bass line which pretty much ruined everything , i tried eq-ing the bass , but still sounded like crap so i've changed it completely I will post it after i'm done with it =D
this is almost touching technoid, which is the main style I love
I just woke up and thought that it was all muddy cause of my ears being dodgy now... that's why I quoted Cluster.
Sounds a bit messed up, you need to get rid of some elements, or change their octaves up or down