Current WIP (jump up) any feedback would be great

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  1. Arfeds

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    basically showing off the main arrangement

    the transitions and timing are completely off at the mo but should hopefully have it finished when i get time

    http://soundcloud.com/arfeds/lead-mess

    thanks
     
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    Nice dude, sounds tite. Hit me up when you have finished the track
     
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    A small high-cut or low-pass filter on 15-kHz on the start please?! This hurts my ears :(
    Anyway, as I said on SC, awesome intro!
    I would turn up the bass or add a subbass for the main body, but seems like a good start to me :)
     
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    your overall production sounds pretty ok

    you're lackin a sub man... you gotta stick a fat sub under that thing
     
  6. Arfeds

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    cool thanks for the feedback guys

    yea the sub is there but its pretty weak atm i used a standard sine wave and modulated it so it hits with the bass notes. sounds sick on a sub but you cant really make it out on anything else. think i may layer up a sub and make it a bit warmer.
     
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    where's it peaking?
     
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    0db in the mix
     
  9. neddez

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    at what frequency though?