A small high-cut or low-pass filter on 15-kHz on the start please?! This hurts my ears
Anyway, as I said on SC, awesome intro!
I would turn up the bass or add a subbass for the main body, but seems like a good start to me
yea the sub is there but its pretty weak atm i used a standard sine wave and modulated it so it hits with the bass notes. sounds sick on a sub but you cant really make it out on anything else. think i may layer up a sub and make it a bit warmer.