Crits?

[1aoone1]

I made a track latley :

https://soundcloud.com/1aoone1%2Fao-one-ft-wikedman-wiked-man-nah-fear-nobody-else

Any ideas/hints/tips/things I should or shouldn't do in my next project? (such as things I've done wrong in this one and things that can be improved)

 

[djdevz]

pretty good man , some ol school jungle vibes in there...
id say just watch your levels on each of your instruments/fx n make sure u level out ur sounds nicely so ur lead, kick, snare n sub are are punching through nicely
n make sure ur fx arent too loud in comparison eg at 1:07 ur fx is way too loud imo

but nice work man, keep it up!

 

[Mrachniot]

i agree with devz about that fx on 1.07 ... it's way too loud, comparing to the other part of the track. but i like it. jungle stuff ... chilled alot and good melody. in my opinion, sub is a bit loud. that wah wah guitar is good. keep up working. 1L TSP

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[luciduk]

cool track man!! but the drums are soo weak... sounds like u muted the snare before you bounced or something!!

 

[1aoone1]

Thanks guys, appreciate it. Always looking to get better.