Critique for Remake?

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A couple months ago I made a track called "Jaded". To this day it's still my favorite track out of all the ones that I have made.

Today I decided to remake the track completely from scratch because over the two months I learned so much about producing.

I want a critique on the remake just to make sure I got every Nook and Cranny.

"Jaded" from two months ago.
https://soundcloud.com/the-kombine/jaded

"Jaded" remake.
https://soundcloud.com/the-kombine/jaded-remake

Thanks!
 
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