Critique for Remake?

Discussion in 'Production' started by The Kombine, Nov 12, 2013.

  1. The Kombine

    The Kombine New Member

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    A couple months ago I made a track called "Jaded". To this day it's still my favorite track out of all the ones that I have made.

    Today I decided to remake the track completely from scratch because over the two months I learned so much about producing.

    I want a critique on the remake just to make sure I got every Nook and Cranny.

    "Jaded" from two months ago.
    https://soundcloud.com/the-kombine/jaded

    "Jaded" remake.
    https://soundcloud.com/the-kombine/jaded-remake

    Thanks!