Criba - Wider Space WIP (Deep/Minimal)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by criba, Jan 4, 2012.

  1. criba

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    Heres my newest project, I'm hoping some feedback on it. What to improve etc.

    -criba

     
  2. criba

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    uploaded newer version with little changes in songs structure.
     
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    personally id put some more subtle atmos or fx in the intro just to fill it out a bit without over doing it

    like the way the breaks come in and go again

    i think the track could benefit from more percussion maybe

    nice track
     
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    Thanks for your answers, I will post a newer version today/tomorrow depends on how I can manage my time.
     
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    i agree about the atmosphere thing

    doesn't need to be anything snazzy, just to create a vibe for everything to sit on

    its coming along nicely imo
     
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    Agreed, some subtle reverse FX, and a few percussive elements with delay would really benefit this track
     
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    Thanks all for your answers. I think I don't have time today to finish this track. But maybe this weekend ;) booze > dnb @ fridays :D