Criba - Wider Space WIP (Deep/Minimal)

Heres my newest project, I'm hoping some feedback on it. What to improve etc.

-criba

 

uploaded newer version with little changes in songs structure.

 

personally id put some more subtle atmos or fx in the intro just to fill it out a bit without over doing it

like the way the breaks come in and go again

i think the track could benefit from more percussion maybe

nice track

 

Thanks for your answers, I will post a newer version today/tomorrow depends on how I can manage my time.

 

i agree about the atmosphere thing

doesn't need to be anything snazzy, just to create a vibe for everything to sit on

its coming along nicely imo

 

Agreed, some subtle reverse FX, and a few percussive elements with delay would really benefit this track

 

Thanks all for your answers. I think I don't have time today to finish this track. But maybe this weekend booze > dnb @ fridays