creeP - Numb Relaxation (Feedback Appreciated)Liquiddnb

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by creep1g, Mar 4, 2011.

  1. creep1g

    creep1g New Member

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    I'm new too this page so if this is in the wrong place let me know.
    This is my new LiquidDnB song and i would like some feedback on this:)
     
  2. Nice

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    The main sections kind of exhausted my ear out, you should maybe make some sections shorter like 0:45 to 1:50 is really long and doesn't really evolve much. The kick could use some boosting and some more work on the percussion with the drums to get them rolling would improve the song, at the moment the drums are being drowned out by everything. Also the snare I don't like much, it sounds too splashy or something. I would tighten it up or find a new snare sample. I like the piano parts though, really good. I think it might be too much low end on something (sub or pad?) that made the potentially relaxing song not relaxing. It felt like my ear was being bombarded with low end (in a bad way). I reallllly liked the last like 2 seconds though. That sound was awesome.
     
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    Pretty much what nice said:p but u have a nice piano going on and with a good mixdown this would be nice
     
  4. creep1g

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    thanks! ill try my best too make it better. Again thanks for a good feedback :D