Drum & Bass Crankshaft/Ward's Ambition - DEMOS

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Menosance, Jun 28, 2012.

  1. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

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    This is my Soundcloud link to 2 unsigned tracks made by me.


    Both 87 BPM
    Both Drum & Bass

    If any label would like to listen to the full tracks or actually sign them, do send an email to ecachia94@gmail.com

    MENOSANCE :)

    *Any feedback is also greatly appriciated*
     
  2. bulletstorm

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    I feel like the drums could use a lot more impact.
    they are to much on the background, and therefore the track sounds a bit too soft.
    Also the first tune feels a bit empty, maybe layering some leads or adding stuff will make it feel full and complete.

    I really really like the piano in the second tune, somehow it reminded me of Nine Inch Nails =)
    the whole vibe actually reminded me of nin, which is cool.
    but some elements just don't right to me, maybe the songs are a bit too plain imo.
     
  3. Menosance

    Menosance aka OSOI

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    Thanks I really appriciate these comments.

    so on a scale from 1 to 5 what would be your rating? (1-lowest, 5-highest) :)