cowards - wip ( jump up )

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  1. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    ez guys just a bit iv been working on called cowards.
    The first jump up tune iv attempted to make as I havnt been producing that long, struggling to get my ideas into basslines but as this is still early on .
    Feedback greatly appreciated!

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    http://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo/cowards
     
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  2. luciduk

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    beat sounds pretty good man.. layout is nice..
    bass is sweet.

    you have a 4 bar bass riff to start with, 2 bars of one riff and then a long fading note of bass under the bottom, i think that would sound alot better without the other notes on top of it. so you have 2 bars of the first bass sound and then this long fading note.. just as a 4 bar loop like u have but without that original bass sound over lapping the fading note, i think that would sound sick if you did that.. but this is good work so far man soundin heavy
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    This has got some good potential for sure. I agree with Lucid on the bass riff, definately have the long note at the end of the 4 bars stand out on its own, give it a little more presence too!
    Look forward to hearing the finished product!
     
  4. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    cheers lucid yeah i agree man, i need to tweak with the one note to try and get it sounding better. good ideas cheers.
    nice one freek ill have to go back to it and have a play around with it.
    If theres any of ur tracks you want me look at then link me up, i had a look at a good few earlier so let me know if i missed yours, safe!
     
  5. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    I didn't listen to the previous version, but I'm liking this one altough I'm not a jump up fan at all.. drums sound really phat, the bass to.. but if I were you I would have turned down the attack of that "fading-in-bass-note" a bit, so it hits a bit earlier.. but that's personal preference..
    keep up the good work!
     
  7. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    thanks man!
    yeh i wasnt 100% happy with it but got to the point where id changed it so much i just got frustrated!!
    thanks for the feedback!