Couple New Tracks: Both unfinished and need advice on how to improve

[EXcEsSDnB]

I recently began a couple of new tracks and need advice on what to add

http://soundcloud.com/excess-2

any help would be appreiciated

 

[Introspect]

You have a good sound going, and good clairty, nice drum beats, not too in your face like alot of drum beats, only thing i am not so keen on is your basslines, but that is just my personal taste and if you love em, keep em coming.

 

[EXcEsSDnB]

thanks for that, i'll try to improve them

 

[EvezDroppin]

yeah fair play mate your drums sound really good the bassline just needs tweakin or lowering in volume a bit, let the sub do most the work i think it will sound alot better then!

 

[Dj Locust]

yep, i really like your drum work.
The Bassline in Incomplete sounds wrong.. i think its too loud. Maybe it sounds better if you play it with a notch filter over it.

ez

 

[Introspect]

In fact, if you don't me asking, what sample pack(s) have you used for your drums?

 

[EXcEsSDnB]

to be honest, im not really sure, i recently downloaded a whole load so i'll try and find out for you, and then post it back onto this thread.
and thanks everyone

 

[Jolly Jumpa]

Track #1:
Drums got a lot of clarity which is good. But it sounds like the whole sound itself is a bit over limited/compressed and there's so "space" in it, if you knwo what I mean...?
Seems like there's a lack of Sub in this and... it's lagging. Turn thatg up a little... and was this a insert or beginning to end song?
Track #2:
Again, nice drumming, but there's a lack of space inbetween. If you listen to any high selling producer like Break you'll know what I'm talking about. Though! There is massive potential man! Check it out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpxLLxl1xJY
Cheers
Steve

 

[Dj Locust]

Hey mate, after listening to the riff of "untitled" i just had to do my own thing with that.
So... would be cool if you give it a listen: http://soundcloud.com/locust-1/locust-untitled-remix

What do you guys think?

 

[EXcEsSDnB]

its a real nice remix locust, cheers

and dj synergex, i understand what you mean and will take it into account while im continuing my project, thanks