You have a good sound going, and good clairty, nice drum beats, not too in your face like alot of drum beats, only thing i am not so keen on is your basslines, but that is just my personal taste and if you love em, keep em coming.
Drums got a lot of clarity which is good. But it sounds like the whole sound itself is a bit over limited/compressed and there's so "space" in it, if you knwo what I mean...?
Seems like there's a lack of Sub in this and... it's lagging. Turn thatg up a little... and was this a insert or beginning to end song?
Again, nice drumming, but there's a lack of space inbetween. If you listen to any high selling producer like Break you'll know what I'm talking about. Though! There is massive potential man! Check it out http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpxLLxl1xJY