Conclude - Go 2 Sleep
It's not done yet. Before I add the last touches and the bass I would like some opinions. Which part sucks, which is better, what to lose, what to add etc.
This one was an attempt at darkstep. Guess it ain't that dark though, since the rolls were not that much chromatic and dissonant. But I'm trying to learn.
All kinda criticism will be appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/conclude/go2sleep
edit: I've used the Helicoptor break.
It's not done yet. Before I add the last touches and the bass I would like some opinions. Which part sucks, which is better, what to lose, what to add etc.
This one was an attempt at darkstep. Guess it ain't that dark though, since the rolls were not that much chromatic and dissonant. But I'm trying to learn.
All kinda criticism will be appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/conclude/go2sleep
edit: I've used the Helicoptor break.
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