comments on this please all criticism wanted

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by AdamDNB, Feb 13, 2016.

  1. AdamDNB

    AdamDNB New Member

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    Hi,

    Please let me know if this tune is going in the right direction, i would like all comments so be honest. I'm still learning currently taking a ableton live course and learning.

    thanks
    Adam

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    [soundcloud url="" params="color=ff5500&auto_play=false&hide_related=false&show_comments=true&show_user=true&show_reposts=false" width="100%" height="166" iframe="true" /]
     
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    ok i don't know how to post so heres a link
     
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    o that worked
     
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    hi adam .. seems to be an intro only ... but sounds really nice. i would build up from here. will be a good tune .. cheers !
     
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    hi, any new versions of your track?