comments on this please all criticism wanted

[AdamDNB]

Hi,

Please let me know if this tune is going in the right direction, i would like all comments so be honest. I'm still learning currently taking a ableton live course and learning.

thanks
Adam

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[AdamDNB]

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[AdamDNB]

ok i don't know how to post so heres a link

https://soundcloud.com/adam-parsons-10%2Funnamed-wip

 

[AdamDNB]

ok i don't know how to post so heres a link

https://soundcloud.com/adam-parsons-10%2Funnamed-wip

o that worked

 

[maschinistom]

hi adam .. seems to be an intro only ... but sounds really nice. i would build up from here. will be a good tune .. cheers !

 

[maschinistom]

hi, any new versions of your track?