Comments/help needed on new track.

[Symmethree]

http://soundcloud.com/symmethree/spectrum

comments plz, and yes you can be very critical.

 

[dexter]

i swear this is gotta be like the third time you have put your track in the wrong section

 

[ali^]

it all sounds really really MIDI, i think you should try making each sound fit into the mix a little bit more, it just sounds like you've layered a load of shit but in key sounds really mate.

 

[ruksi]

i think the beats need to be a lot punchier.. and the synth kinda sound seems a bit too harsh and overpowering. maybe put a chorus through it to add some width and atmosphere...

but as ali said its in key so the hard work is done!

 

[ARTFX]

Yeah it sounds too dull, add some more width.
That synth is a little to loud.
And it could be me but where is your sub bass?

 

[Symmethree]

how do you create a subbass and what is it exactly? cause i put in a kick/snare etc. and a bassline
but what is a sub bass? now i'm not a novice when it comes to dnb but i just don't know how to create them myself..

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Yeah it sounds too dull, add some more width.
That synth is a little to loud.
And it could be me but where is your sub bass?

how do you create a sub bass and what is it exactly? cause i put in a kick/snare etc. and a bassline
but what is a sub bass? now i'm not a novice when it comes to dnb but i just don't know how to create them myself..

 

[sausagenumber9]

Great melodies, but yes use some reverb and add some widith to it - nice atmospheric feeling. Drums should be a little more punched.
You should listen to all this tips and do it and make final mixdown.
Cheers!