COMING FOR YOU - liquid DnB

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by maschinistom, Jul 29, 2016.

  1. maschinistom

    maschinistom Active Member

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    Hello. This is another track I finished this week. Any feedback welcome !

     
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    Hey man! Another nice track! you have got some great plucky chord sounds! And the vocals fit the track realy good where did you get these kind of vocals? :D maybe the high freqs of the snare and hihats need a little bit cleaning that's all I can think about, but overal a great track!!!! keep it up!
     
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    I like the track same as the last comment the snare and hats need sorting out I think I like the little shuffle you got going in the beat and the vocals sound really good, I recognise the melody from a remix I was playing around with a while back though can't remember the name of it
     
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    Thanks man! The snare is a 4 layer and the hats 2 layers, I turned them down already a lot but it seems not enough, thanks for hinting, I didn't realise! It would be great if u can check and tell where u heard the chords melody !! Cheers !
     
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    You sure you don't already know it I mean it's not that I just recognise bits of it the whole chord melody is exactly the same but I will look for it later when I get on my laptop
     
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    I really don't know for sure on which tune I could have heard that melody before ... Could be I have listened to my track too many times and it burned that melody into my brain ;)
    Thanks for searching though bro !
     
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    Haha that is the melody from Zedd - Spectrum! Works cool tho in DNB :) Id make the snare mono tho if I were you and the kick also, they are too much upfront for me now personally. Vocals add a cool vibe!
     
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    Now wheres my fiver? ;)
     
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    Thanks a lot for your input battletek!! Shit .. so I heard the melody before and my brain just played it back. I was hoping this wasn't the case. Anyway, cheers for bringing clearity to me. Send me ur PayPal account email via PM and the fiver is yours :)
     
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    hahahaha nah mate, cant rip u off like that, was just playing you :p
     
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    Damn beat me to it!
     
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    It sounds weird without the drums central, otherwise enjoyed
     
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    I like the chord harmony, the last two riffs are suprising : )
     
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    U are right, I had a listen today again with headphones on and drums not central didn't convince me too much. I tried some new stereo widening tool for this track and guess I have overdone it a bit. Thanks for pointing out!
     
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    really fun-sounding song, love the vibe!
     
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    cheers bro :)
     
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    unfortunately not my melody ;)
     
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    pretty liquily vocal. like a synth part. also, good and cool track. like the rthytm man.
    goood work ;)