come true- liquid hospital vibe dnb track

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jimjam123, May 2, 2011.

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is it rave or radio worthy?

  1. yeah sounds nice

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  2. yeah needs some work tho

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  3. naaa dont be silly

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  1. jimjam123

    jimjam123 New Member

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    what does everyone thing of my new tune? is it radio worthy, what can i do to spruce the tune up? feedback me and ill give u money :lol:



    and if u can be bothered feedback me on my others
    http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

    cheers thanx
     
  2. Carlo lepore

    Carlo lepore Member

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    Ye mate really nice track feelin it. You could have spent a bit longer on the vocals to really make it radio worthy
     
  3. jimjam123

    jimjam123 New Member

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    i thought that but didnt know how to bring them out anymore without messing it up what do u recommend?
     
  4. luciduk

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    nice track dude, the vibe is tops. the mixdown may need a little work.. if u want my opinion, i would give the drums more low end (kick drum isnt thumping enough) should have a lower end to it. thats my main gripe actually, this tune would be great with a solid kick
     
  5. jimjam123

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    nice one man