Collie Buddz - Blind To You FL studio remix!

[jwongonline]

This is a remix of Collie Buddz "Blind To You" i made on Fl studio 6.
Bear in mind this is the 1st dnb tune i've ever made im just looking for some tips on how to improve and get better.

CONSTRUCTIVE criticism welcome!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u7eoZHEfb_g

 

[demonicdnb]

so, this is your first post, and besides that if your song totally sucks, you dont wanna hear about it. ?
though i actually think its ok. not my style but it sounds fine i guess. except you posted it on youtube, which makes
any song sound like ass. So I can't tell if the drums completely suck, or if they are just coming through that way.
also I cant tell if you used the crappiest high hat samples in the world, or if they are just coming through that way.


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[demonicdnb]

oh i almost forgot, this is the wrong forum.

 

[RevTech]

Bass needs boosting I think.

It's a good start honestly, but things in general could be tighter and such.

 

[demonicdnb]

oh i almost forgot, this is the wrong forum.

once again i may have sounded like an ass, and today am much nicer.

but seriously, it is hard to tell whats really going on with the youtube compression, etc.

it is a good start to a track though.

 

[demonicdnb]

Bass needs boosting I think.

It's a good start honestly, but things in general could be tighter and such.

sub bass could def use some gain, and some mild compression.

 

[jwongonline]

so, this is your first post, and besides that if your song totally sucks, you dont wanna hear about it. ?
though i actually think its ok. not my style but it sounds fine i guess. except you posted it on youtube, which makes
any song sound like ass. So I can't tell if the drums completely suck, or if they are just coming through that way.
also I cant tell if you used the crappiest high hat samples in the world, or if they are just coming through that way.


soundcloud.com <<<<< FREE

seriously u can tell me if it sucks and i don't think im able to put all the blame on youtube for my amateur sounding drums lol

oh i almost forgot, this is the wrong forum.

tbh i don't have much of a clue about how this site works i only joined yesterday but i thought this might be the wrong place, could u let me know where i should be posting this kind of this?

Bass needs boosting I think.

It's a good start honestly, but things in general could be tighter and such.

cheers man, it is an unmixed/unmastered song cos i lost the FL file before i could finish it off and i don't have much of a clue about the technical aspects of things, i guess il go do my research about mixdown techniques etc

 

[demonicdnb]

its all good. i was in a giving a hard time mood. better place for reviews etc. is at the top of the page in the production forum under tune review or whatever.

cheers.