Cloudburst - Shattered Beauty

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JimpaDirt, Apr 1, 2013.

  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    I'm back with a new track again and it's another neurofunk one. Sort of feel like im progressing a bit production wise now at last, by small admounts but its feeling good :D



    The main thing im concerned about is if its too repetetive... how much copy paste can you get away with? All feedback is more than welcome, cheers!
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    I cant believe no one has commented on this yet?!?!

    I love your tracks man, really dig the intricity of them all, always sounds so full an energetic! Great job!
     
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    Nice one fletch! :) Glad you like it!
     
  4. LVB

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    I love it! the reeverb on the lead fills it out nicely!! drums sounding solid, and the bass work is interesting! good work!! although sometimes it sounds a bit empty to me, could use some more crashes, downlifters etc.!
     
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    liking your tracks mate, another good job on this one

    would be interesting to see what you could come up if you step away from the neuro and try a different style :)
     
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    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Thanks! much appreciated guys.

    Funny thing! I'm actually started on a project earlier today thats more "melodic". Hopefully I'll be able to finnish it :p
     
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    This is really nice man! Definitely feeling the drop.

    I wouldn't say it's that repetitive, though I would still aim to change at least 2 elements every 16 bars, just to keep it interesting.

    Great work!
     
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    sweet, thanks :) Sound like a good rule, I'll keep that in mind!
     
  9. Carbine

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    Woah awesome man! You've weaved the sounds together really nicely throughout the main sections. The intro and breakdown are a nice contrast as well, keeps things interesting. Wicked sound design also!