Cloudburst - Sauce (Dark / Minimal?) !

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JimpaDirt, Jun 12, 2013.

  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    This is a tune that I've been working on and of with for some time. And yesterday I finally pulled my finger out of my ass and finished it!

    Kind of dark, sorta minimal...



    What do u think? And btw does the intro work? It's totally different than the rest of the tune.. just wondering if thats something that works.
     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Intro doesn't fit the drop at all lol! Nice drop tho. Not a fan of the intro
     
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    wicked bass
     
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    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Haha! I was just trying out some stuff for the intro and got an idea just to make something completely different... Like an experiment or something like that, but I'm not a scientist so maybe I should stay away from that sort of stuff!

    Cool beans, thanks lads!
     
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    yeah that synth on the intro is way too 'happy' sounding and kinda spoils the vibe of the track.......could do with changing the midi notes for some darker ones and/or using a different sound

    but the drop is good tho, your bass is spot on mate
     
  6. usualsuspects

    usualsuspects Sippin

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    Intro dosnt work, I would change it. The drop is really nice. Got good sounds going on there.
     
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    I listened to this on soundcloud before reading this thread, and when the drop came Jim I was pretty shocked. The two don't work well together, for me the intro should still give some of the vibe of what's to come and it didn't really :)

    Seperating them out they are both good, would like to hear you work a tune based on the intro synths though :D
     
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    Thanks guys! This isn't a peice I will go back to and fix.. everything is in audio now so I just can't be arsed :teeth:

    But I will stay away from doing that in the future!