Cloudburst - Bluescreen

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by JimpaDirt, Mar 13, 2013.

  1. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Heavy dnb track I finnished earlier today! Its the first track in a while that im actually feeling alright about :)



    Any thoughts, feedback and such is much welcome!
     
  2. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    really liking this one man bass is sick and the overall tune is pretty beastly.lol
    one thing tho maybe the drums could come out a bit more
    and maybe needs some cleaning up here and there but alltogether its a sold tune
    good work man
     
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    i think the beat could do with a high pass break to fill it out a bit more

    not feeling that little vocal tho, sorry!

    but other than that i like it
     
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    agree with both of the above... nice tune.. the high end of the bass is too low in comparison to the drums they do quite badly over power them... sort that and killer track man
     
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    Cheers! Useful feedback all of it :)

    Thanks!
     
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    awesome track mate. but expected a bit more "driving" things after the drop. Maybe some percussions ;) Maybe thats only because it´s not really my style of dnb ;)
     
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    Thanks man! I had an idea of simple and heavy but perhaps Im not where I can make it sound full without alot of stuff going on yet :p
     
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    bass sounds sick, man interesting sounds you've used as well. as people have mentioned mix is a bit off but i like the originality of it, could be a really really big track with the right mixdown
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    love the groove to this man! top work
     
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    Nice one guys, thanks :)
     
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    The Rotherman New Member

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    ~Drums do feel very off, in my opinion, but above that, the synthwork is great and the feel of the track is good.
    On the drop, try that really overused breaks rhythm that you find in most dnb. Overused but still has a powerful beat element.
     
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    Would be great if you could tell me in what way you think they sound "off". Thanks for the feedback anyway :)
     
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    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    Those bass sounds need to be a tad low I think, and those drums higher of course, more hi hats wouldn't harm neither!
    Expected some more hardyness haha all in all, good job!
     
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    Ty neo! To sum all of it up, I think I need to spend more time on the mixdown and making sure everything is coming trough.