Cinematic DNB Track

[Huskyroc]

https://soundcloud.com/huskyroc%2Fdont-fall-asleep

Thanks for listening! Any Tips or suggestions are highly welcomed! I'm still new to producing! Thanks!

 

[ND4SPDMW11]

The drum pattern in the intro is really good. However, I feel like there's something missing from the center of the mix. It feels empty in the center of the mix, and it feels kind of weird with the sub-bass. If it's cinematic, I would definitely add more atmosphere to the song. Add some back ground sounds that are more prominent, perhaps using powerful reverb and delay. At 2:12, I would add something like a rise or arp, just to keep the track flowing. Those are my suggestions

 

[DesigN]

heavy bass in the into. gets that maching feel as well. i also agree with adding some pads and ambience to fill up some of the depth the reverb on the lead bass creates. but overall good work.

 

[TinnitusD&B]

Decent man. I don't think it missing out on too much. I think adding too much more would take away from the main body of the track. Maybe carrying some of the intro's vocals through into the main section with some verb and echo/delay would be good but not necessary. Peace

 

[Northern Seagul]

nice idea and interesting structure of track.
strange drum and bass. massive but drop is boring.
and, nice sounding )

 

[Huskyroc]

Thanks for all the suggestions!! Definitely going to keep these in mind!

 

[DesigN]

hey forgot to post this lemme know what you think if you get a chance!!!
[soudncloud.com]

https://soundcloud.com/chemical-sounds%2Fplank-original-mix-coming-soon