Drum & Bass Chilled DnB Track

[Meep]

Just thought I would post my track and see what kinda criticism I can get. It's the first type of track I have made like this. I'm okay if you're brutally honest. I love you <3

https://soundcloud.com/tallstraw%2Fchilled-dnb

 

[bansal321]

im liking this mate BUT.....

1) The intro goes on for far too long, u can shorten it by half the amount and get what u need out of it....
2) the bass kick has not got enough weight to it, maybe a bit more low end on the kick?

a few little creases to iron out then this song becomes amazing!

 

[luciduk]

production not bad on this, its all quite clear sounds, but it needs certain techniques to make it sound more drumandbassy. it needs smoothing out (with the drums) but that is something that you get in time!! keep writing man!

 

[Meep]

im liking this mate BUT.....

1) The intro goes on for far too long, u can shorten it by half the amount and get what u need out of it....
2) the bass kick has not got enough weight to it, maybe a bit more low end on the kick?

a few little creases to iron out then this song becomes amazing!

Thanks for the feedback, I'll give that a try!

production not bad on this, its all quite clear sounds, but it needs certain techniques to make it sound more drumandbassy. it needs smoothing out (with the drums) but that is something that you get in time!! keep writing man!

Thanks for commenting, any advice on doing that?