sounds pretty cool man nice an grimey.
i quite like the beat on this sounds good.
i recon the intro needs sum work
im not sure about the drug sampke or watever i recon that shud go.
overall soundin pretty good would like to here the finished version.
ye sounds a lot better now that the bass isnt clipping like a bitch. unless u going for some minimal style i reckon u could get a couple more sounds in there, be it just fx or little switches to other synths, even if its just stabs - reckon it could sound cool. synth in the break sounds a little weak, could be beefed up a bit, think u could make it sound nicer. stay on this track