Cheesestick [I think it is DNB)

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  1. w_ashley

    w_ashley New Member

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    http://williamashley.info/mp3/cheesestick.mp3

    (4221KB 192KBS)

    I normally write more housey/techy/trancy stuff, and got suspended from the site I normally post to due to show a little too much skin. As such I though since I wrote a more DNB sounding track I'd post it up to a DNB forum. Feel open to trash this as it is one of my very few DNB sounding tracks I've ever written.

    Also it is short, and the first minute is a totally different sound and feel. It is unedited, and just pretty much a dry run.


    Comments of course are welcome be they disin my un DNBness or doing a bigup to the sound.
     
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    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Well thats certainly not drum and bass, nor is it anywhere near it.

    Sounds like everything has reverb and delay slapped all over it! it kinda hurt a little....
     
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    jimjimjim oldskool

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    i cant comment on production cause im no good meself - but sounded ok kick drums bit weak.
    some good ideas but they all over each other the tune didnt feel like a journey man. too much going on.
    respect tho.
     
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    Key gen music
     
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    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Not at all drum and bass (; and as said before, sounds like it belongs in a keygen. ;D
     
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