Why is everyone so harsh on this track? It's not bad at all, I don't know if it's good enough to be released on a label, but it definitely has potential. I'd first of all get rid of the transformers sample, it could go well without it and there are already way too much transformers tunes out there. I'd also add some more sounds , make it more interesting to listen to. Maybe some extra percussion and variation in the bassline. And of course fix the intro, but from what i see that was not on purpose. I'm not too sure about the gap between your measures, maybe fill them up with something to keep the flow going.