Check out my new dnb track

[funkmaster322]

Hey y'all check out my new dnb track. Its liquid dnb with an "ethereal" feel to it. Any criticism is also welcome

https://soundcloud.com/funkometry%2Fdnbidea-1

Thanks for your time

 

[risto orpus]

Ain't much of an expert to ad anything, but it does feel like it's lacking something, though as a whole track it sounds really nice, i like the chill,
weightlessness sound you were going for here (trying to sound smarter than I actually am :s).
I think it's more of an preference but i would prefer to pad to be a bit more subtle, like flowing in the backround , and let the beat and bass guide it.
But overall I really do like the track.

 

[WhoSayReload?]

Really nice pads and vibes on the intro, very musical! I would rather the tune dropped on 48 bars to make it easier for the DJ but you don't have to. When that sweeping pad kicks in at 2:05 it masks your drums. I think what is wrong with the tune is that the pads etc are too loud whilst the drums and bass are too quiet, both the drums and the bass could definitely have more oomph and power.

 

[IV4]

Your drums need to be more upfront in the mix and so should your bass. Musically this song is very good but the mix is off.