check out my new dnb track. let us no what ya fink.

ponicz

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check out my new dnb track. let us no what ya fink.
this is my first dnb track iv made and am workin on a few more tracks atm. let us no wat ya fink so i can improve for my other tracks thanks .
i have also re did the track which i brought the bass up abit and more of a role
http://soundcloud.com/ponicz

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im just currently uploading the re done track
 

luciduk

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not a fan of the bass man it kinda sound like a wasp is in my ear and its killing me slowlly.... drums are cool
 

duttymonster

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like the sampling.

bass is a bit much and very high in the mix, overkennypowers the drums after the drop. perhaps a bit of sidechain compression?

i really like the quick little alternate notes in the bassline, i would add way more of this and not hold the main bass notes for
as long as they are now. mix it up much more if you know what i mean?

i personally would also go to town with a low pass/band pass filter LFO to get a 'wamp' out of the bassline too.

in fact that might be exactly what it needs to take it to the next level.

looking forward to hearing progress.

DM
 

ponicz

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yer nice 1 man just wat i need, proper geeza hu no's hes shit. im gonna start working on it inabit. i no exactly what you mean coz i feel that all my tracks hasnt yet got da top edge but this information will help me improve. thanks man.
 

luciduk

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ra my last comment was a bit harsh man!! sorry! i think that main bass needs to be LP or BP filtered and maybe an octave higher it wud be nicer, its just too harsh a noise, it hurt my head!
 

ARTFX

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Yeah work on the bass some more.
Maybe make the drums a lot more punchy though, to keep it danceable.
Yeahh and start adding more variations, clean things up a little it and add some more effects on several sounds.
 

ponicz

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no worries geez im just workin on the track now so should hopefully be posted 2nyt. thanks man

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Yeah work on the bass some more.
Maybe make the drums a lot more punchy though, to keep it danceable.
Yeahh and start adding more variations, clean things up a little it and add some more effects on several sounds.

yer nice 1 man! just workin on it now.thanks for ya help and hope to hear from you once i finshed the track! loving ya tune man. sikkkkk!

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how would do get it to sound so clean, like giving it that top quality sound? any help geezas? thanks
 
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