Check out my first sizzlin tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Minus xerox, Jun 21, 2003.

  1. Minus xerox

    Minus xerox New Member

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    Wots up forum, heres my first post and my first tune....ever. Its been a long time coming but finally finished. :D

    Jalapeno is a mix of Jazzy piano riffs and gtr with a twist at 2.16. Im hoping to get sum vocals going on this tune so if anybody knows any vocalists or are one themselves, preferablly female vocalists plz email me.
    Ive also posted another tune called sibleus at the bottom but I didnt seem to get newhere with it so gave up, I personally didnt like the tune.
    The full version will be posted on here in the near future.
    N-joy

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  2. Charge

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    Not really feeling this im afraid, where is the bass?? seems to start coming through at the end of the three minutes but not enough imo. Drums are a little noisey and sound a little like someone tapping rythmically on a bit of corrigated iron with a big stick, but thats just my opinion.
     
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    Affliction thought size didnt matter

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    ez man. as this is your first tune im gonna go easy on ya...

    first thing that strikes me.... cutty ranks! :mrpanic:
    the kick drums needs some punch to it.... try layering another kick drum with an EQ boost around 5khz. Snare drum sounds pretty cool... could probably benefit with some compression and being slightly quieter in the mix. I quite like your use of different instruments.... not many dnb producers these days using honky tonks & oboes in their tunes :slayer: I actually really like the change up at 2:26...... i think the part of the tune actually has alot of potential... maybe you could take this part and stretch it out into a tune of its own... i think it would be pretty rawkin! (without the cheesy piano) :slayer:
    Oh, and as element said.... where's the bass?!?! i can just about make out the bassline... but it needs to be much much louder!

    overall... better then my first tune! :lol:
     
  4. Minus xerox

    Minus xerox New Member

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    Useful comments boys!
    The only shitty thing is that cant work on any of my tunes at the moment cos my computers extremly low on memory :mad: and a new computer seems to be in order