DnB Chapter 11 - Suspicious (WIP)

[Chapter11]

Hey forum long time ! hope everyone has been keeping well.

Been out of the attempting to produce game for a while but recently I've been trying to put a few hours here and there into this project.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated (mixdown / elements / ideas to improve on / etc)

https://soundcloud.com/chapter11dnb%2Fchapter-11-suspicious-wip-clip

 

[Mike Z]

I'm relatively new to producing, so I'm gonna give some feedback with my dnb listener hat on.
My uneducated notes:
- The intro is balanced and fluid, the vocal does sound a bit loud compared to the rest.
- The minimal composition really sits well together and sounds cool, definitely got a good grove going.
Wish I could give more and better feedback. I'm excited to hear the finished song.

 

[Chapter11]

I'm relatively new to producing, so I'm gonna give some feedback with my dnb listener hat on.
My uneducated notes:
- The intro is balanced and fluid, the vocal does sound a bit loud compared to the rest.
- The minimal composition really sits well together and sounds cool, definitely got a good grove going.
Wish I could give more and better feedback. I'm excited to hear the finished song.

Thanks for the feedback Z !

After listening again on a different setup I can see what you mean about the vocals, I've rolled them back now about 10% and I think they sit much better in the mix.

I'm glad you mentioned the word Groove, that's ideally what the whole thing started as, hard sometimes to nod your head to your own project so I kinda tried to set the whole thing up so I would enjoy listening to it as I'm trying to turn it from a pile of shite ! ha !

Thanks again for the feedback brother, keep your thread updated with your track I'm also excited to hear what you add to it !

 

[Derelicts Of Tomorrow]

i posted feedback on your soundcloud cuz lets face it thats what we all want but that set aside this tune is fucking awesome and i would rotate it frequently so send it to me damn it
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[Chapter11]

i posted feedback on your soundcloud cuz lets face it thats what we all want but that set aside this tune is fucking awesome and i would rotate it frequently so send it to me damn it
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Thanks for the feedback brother ! haha I'll get this wrapped up asap and fire it over.

 

[TinnitusD&B]

Nice! The tail on the kick is a little long for me. Other than that it's sounding great!

 

[Chapter11]

Hey guys,

Implemented all the advice given and now just trying to work through the breakdown + keep the track moving.

Any feedback on the update so far is appreciated !

https://soundcloud.com/chapter11dnb%2Fchapter-11-suspicious-wip-update

 

[Mike Z]

This is a really cool song!
Mixing aside, I can't comment on that, I think the song flows really well and all the elements come together nicely, sounds pro tbh.

 

[Chapter11]

Thanks Mike Z, really appreciate it brother !