Captiv - Duplex

[ali1212]

Heres my first attempt at making a dnb tune.

any comments welcome. go easy lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6TjOuh4i7c&fmt=22

 

[subprime]

The drums need a bit of work, and the tune could be fleshed out a bit.
But good for a first attempt man, you got the basis of a tune there.

 

[ali1212]

yeah its not finished at all, and i just put up a short version as to make it easier for people to listen to.
what can i do to the drums?

 

[glenemy]

not a bad start, don't like that cheesy piano sample, and the tune does need more to it and some more drum layers, better than my first tune tho (apart from the piano, lol)

 

[ali1212]

hmmm i know what your saying about cheesy piano tbh lol. ive also made a dubstep tune yesterday, although this is a drumnbass forum what dyou reckon to this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVaogH_8qhI&fmt=22

 

[Lucidproduction]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6TjOuh4i7c&fmt=22

sounds nice man... i like the piano melody, ur kick and snare just need to be more crisp and punchy u dig?>

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVaogH_8qhI&fmt=22

good sounds but it needs a better musical arrangment, uv got the idea and the right sounds but u need a better riff or bass arrangment as this one is quite boring.

 

[ali1212]

yeah im workin on more drum layers for the piano tune atm and tryna eq the kick/snare. as for the dubstep tune im gonna just make a new "musical arrangement" as i agree that that ones not really goin anywhere. thanks a lot lucid

 

[Neural Tech]

vid no workey

 

[ali1212]

yeah i deleted it and will re up it when ive added more stuff to it.

 

[Jacomelli]

Oi! that could sound sick with a proper Break B-Line and sum heavy drums.. good work bruv, keep at it.

 

[ali1212]

Cheers mate, still very much learning about production tbh