Captiv - Duplex

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ali1212, Sep 18, 2009.

  1. ali1212

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    The drums need a bit of work, and the tune could be fleshed out a bit.
    But good for a first attempt man, you got the basis of a tune there.
     
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    yeah its not finished at all, and i just put up a short version as to make it easier for people to listen to.
    what can i do to the drums?
     
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    glenemy Enemy is here

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    not a bad start, don't like that cheesy piano sample, and the tune does need more to it and some more drum layers, better than my first tune tho (apart from the piano, lol)
     
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    yeah im workin on more drum layers for the piano tune atm and tryna eq the kick/snare. as for the dubstep tune im gonna just make a new "musical arrangement" as i agree that that ones not really goin anywhere. thanks a lot lucid
     
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    yeah i deleted it and will re up it when ive added more stuff to it.
     
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    Jacomelli J4COM3LL1

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    Oi! that could sound sick with a proper Break B-Line and sum heavy drums.. good work bruv, keep at it.
     
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    Cheers mate, still very much learning about production tbh