Can i have some feedback pls guys....

[Dubsta]

Hey, just been working on this track....only headphone mixdown so any input / feedback would much appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fdj-dubsta%2Fvomit-party-dj-dubsta

 

[MisterApe]

Maybe try some more variation in that bassline, it gets a bit repetitive at some point.

 

[Praxisaxis]

Positives:
*Sounds are nice and crisp.
*Sub bass is pleasing to the ear
*Plenty of air in the mix, so it's well balanced.

Negatives:
* The drum pattern stays the same much too much. It would only be nice if you're in the mood for extremely repetitive music.
* Drum sounds stay the same too much.
* Bass pattern is pretty dull.
* There is nothing in the texture to maintain interest.

Ambient melodious liquidy tunes can afford to be repetitive, but the best ones do something to keep you there - they subtly vary continuously, or introduce new elements periodically.

 

[DjCartel]

all sounds crisp and the mix is good. just needs a lot of variation, some fx, synth stabs, drum switches, etc to keep it interesting

 

[Fatkidscantjump]

I agree with all of the above, more variations needed but its a really solid start, nice one !

 

[Neomind]

Maybe try some more variation in that bassline, it gets a bit repetitive at some point.

This is my thing. Apart from that everything else is well sounding =) Maybe some reverb on that hi-hat's high end cause it sounds quite "mono"

 

[JimpaDirt]

I'm agreeing with the others about variation in the bassline. And you could maybe even try a whole other note pattern for the 2nd drop. The atmospheric stuff is working well, the fills and breaks are nice as well.

 

[Dubsta]

Thanks guys .....great input....will get back to work on this at the weekend