Can i have some feedback pls guys....

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dubsta, Oct 13, 2013.

  1. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    Hey, just been working on this track....only headphone mixdown so any input / feedback would much appreciated.

     
  2. MisterApe

    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    Maybe try some more variation in that bassline, it gets a bit repetitive at some point.
     
  3. Praxisaxis

    Praxisaxis New Member

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    Positives:
    *Sounds are nice and crisp.
    *Sub bass is pleasing to the ear
    *Plenty of air in the mix, so it's well balanced.

    Negatives:
    * The drum pattern stays the same much too much. It would only be nice if you're in the mood for extremely repetitive music.
    * Drum sounds stay the same too much.
    * Bass pattern is pretty dull.
    * There is nothing in the texture to maintain interest.

    Ambient melodious liquidy tunes can afford to be repetitive, but the best ones do something to keep you there - they subtly vary continuously, or introduce new elements periodically.
     
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    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    all sounds crisp and the mix is good. just needs a lot of variation, some fx, synth stabs, drum switches, etc to keep it interesting
     
  5. Fatkidscantjump

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    I agree with all of the above, more variations needed but its a really solid start, nice one !
     
  6. Neomind

    Neomind Too many skulls!">:O

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    This is my thing. Apart from that everything else is well sounding =) Maybe some reverb on that hi-hat's high end cause it sounds quite "mono"
     
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    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    I'm agreeing with the others about variation in the bassline. And you could maybe even try a whole other note pattern for the 2nd drop. The atmospheric stuff is working well, the fills and breaks are nice as well.
     
  8. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    Thanks guys .....great input....will get back to work on this at the weekend ;)