can i get a review on this track please - jump up

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Murko, Dec 28, 2015.

  1. Murko

    Murko https://soundcloud.com/murkodnb/tracks

    Joined:
    Dec 4, 2015
    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    5
  2. BattleteK

    BattleteK Active Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2013
    Messages:
    221
    Likes Received:
    62
    Location:
    The Netherlands
    The track overall sounds very dull and repetitive. Try to make the kick/snare more clean and less standard
     
  3. BinstonVanGogh

    BinstonVanGogh New Member

    Joined:
    Mar 9, 2015
    Messages:
    28
    Likes Received:
    12
    Yeah the drums all sound very standard, sample wise.

    I think there should be more fills to add interest to the drum patterns as this does make the track sound very repetitive.

    I would also say that I think that your synths or whatever the weird noises are need to be cleaned up a bit to make them gel together more and again some variation to the patterns.

    You need to add some tension and release as it just seems like once the track starts its at full pace for the rest of the tune.

    I think its def a good rough idea for a track though!
     
  4. Murko

    Murko https://soundcloud.com/murkodnb/tracks

    Joined:
    Dec 4, 2015
    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    5
    cheers for the feedback! its a starting point and i was stuck for improvements so this was very helpful!
     
  5. WhoSayReload?

    WhoSayReload? Well-Known Member

    Joined:
    Jun 7, 2010
    Messages:
    2,498
    Likes Received:
    233
    Location:
    Northampton
    Might work better with a drum pattern similar to Annix Betrayal, or half time. I can't hear much sub in there, and yeah you could try experimenting with some more interesting percussion
     
  6. Murko

    Murko https://soundcloud.com/murkodnb/tracks

    Joined:
    Dec 4, 2015
    Messages:
    47
    Likes Received:
    5
    aha thats the track i tried to emulate the idea off funnily enough