CalmPete - Clean Air (WIP)

Nautilus

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https://soundcloud.com/nautilussix%2Fclean-air
This is my WIP. I want to rebuild the intro to have a good swell. The entire thing needs eqing...which I will leave to my friend who majored in sound design. (until I learn). I know the drops are really cheesy right now. Please feel free to comment and critique!
 
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Mr Fletch

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Main synth is really loud compared to the other elements but apart from that (and a little mixdown) this is really good and has alot of potential
 

Nautilus

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thank you. I hope to rework stuff once elements are mastered. I quickly edited it, reducing the volume of the synth.
 

Fishy:)

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Ye sounding good man, but sounding like everything in the mixdown as wrong;P
 

Nautilus

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I literally have no idea what im doing when it comes to properly mixing it. This is...probably my 6th or 7th song ever. 1st non-remix. 1st that i've given any attempt to eq. Its a mess, I know. In terms of flow, timing, mood, how do you guys like it? I am particularly proud of around 3:30 and onward.
 

audioterminal

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The higher almost arp-kinda synth I love towards the end of the tune. Regarding your mixdown, I don't think I have enough experience to really give you some genuine advice, haha. As a whole though, I like where there sound is going.
 

Capsika

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yeah i'm liking the style but as people have said the mix could do with work, especially as it seems to keep going up and down in volume, i assume as the elements compete for headroom!
 
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personally its little too tokyo for me but the snare is pretty kewl. as said the mix down needs work things in the wrong spot the flow etc.
 

Nautilus

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ha tokyo. I'm trying to aim for dancefloor quality beats, we shall see if my tokyoness continues in the next track.
 
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