Bulletstorm - Dragonbreath

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by bulletstorm, May 31, 2012.

  1. bulletstorm

    bulletstorm Member

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    Hi guys,

    Made a new tune.
    The intro is pretty weak (non-existent) right now but I got sick of working on the tune after hours so I decided to let some fresh ears hear the tune.
    Let me know what you think =)
     
  2. bulletstorm

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    made a few minor changes.
    on my speakers the mixdown sounds pretty good, would be nice if anyone can confirm it or tell me otherwise.

    anyone for a comment?
     
  3. neddez

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    hey bulletstorm old chap

    sorry to say the mix isnt sounding very good on my monitors :( its sounding pretty flat and id def say its lacking in the high end (15khz +)
     
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    Thanks a lot for listening neddez!

    back to mixing it is. I'll hopefully have a new version tomorrow =)
     
  5. lostnthesound

    lostnthesound Burns Easily in the Sun

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    I think this is quite a nice skeleton you've got laid out for the track thus far man. I'm digging the bass sound, but perhaps another layered bass sound (or perhaps a "response" bass sound to the "call") would really add a jolt of energy. Drum programming is sounding quite beefy as well!

    Cheers!
     
  6. msmith222

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    i dont think this is a bad frame at all. i think the bass and drums could use more processing, maybe a few more layers on the kit. but what i think this tune is really missing is a lead. it has a solid bass layer but the bass is missing a "hook"

    definitely wouldn't give up on this, your other productions are better so i know you can bring this one home...

    also, maybe some more risers/releases?