Broken Moon clip

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by underspawn, Jun 6, 2011.

  1. underspawn

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    Updated, still gotta fix the mixdown and sort some of the FX and the 1st/3rd vocal phrases, I'll probably make the main part longer too, but i won't be able to work on the tune in the next 3 months so i uploaded it like this(cuz i didnt have much time to work on it) to(hopefully :D) get some feedback


    Comments appreciated as always,

    Cheers!
     
    Last edited: Jun 17, 2011
  2. djdevz

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    not bad effort man..intro is a lil long and draggin on a bit imo, try building up into the drop as well

    break is decent, a bit more punch from ur kick n snare would help create more energy. Keep at it though :)
     
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    luvly intro, vocals need tuning up tho, theyr a bit out the first time they come in, the 2nd and 4th phrases are ok, but the 3rd is also out, sounds great when it drops, agree with devz points to, keep at it, wuld like to hear more of it with extra polish
     
  4. underspawn

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    Thanks for the advice guys, will work on wat u said.

    Cheers!
     
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    Nice tune m8,
    i'm such a lover for woody snares :D
     
  7. underspawn

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    Glad u like it,
    safe !
     
  8. dj cluster

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    very smooth and jazzy..nice one