You've got some great ideas! At the beginning where it's just the man's vocal, I'd put an eerie pad on there because it sounds kind of empty atm. Also, I'd try to make the kick and snare stand out some more using compression and equalization. Your bass is quite heavy and you've got to make sure that it doesn't overpower other things in the mixdown. Other than that, the track's pretty good!
Yes, the vocal thing gives the atmosphere, but work on drums to get punched through mix! Also I`d experiment with that wobble bass - My 1st idea was to increase the Cutoff LFO range (am I right now? ), but I`m leaving this for your choice.
Hell yeah I'll snag a copy for sure! Free music is the best kind, I already downloaded your track One of Us Has To Die. Really like it probably going to use it in a mix. Cheers man
Yeah I cheated on the dead by dawn sample and didn't mix it right, I just doubled it up in the mix to make it twice as loud, or how ever many db that is, 6db? XD
Still working on my drums, Ive started parrellel gating them because I use a lot of old breaks.